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PostSubject: Book   Tue Apr 24, 2007 6:55 pm

I have written a story called wolf and monkey, i know it has a funny title lol, but it is a real good fantasy fiction story, I only have chapter 1 through 3. well... here goes nothin: Wolf & Monkey
the last of the dark lord
Chaper one
The War


once, there was a guy named Wolf he was half human, half wolf and another guy named Monkey he was half human, half monkey. Both the Dark Lord and his army was their enemy and Wolf and Monkey's enemy too. They faught in wars, sneakouts, and unexpected attacks. They destroyed the Dark Lord many times but not fully destroyed him, and this is the time they do.
"They are going to attack us!", Wolf screamed over the crowd of his and the Dark lord's army as both armys charge to eachother.
Both armys were in Dragon Forest Vally, the most dangerous place to ever have a war. A giant rock could fall in Wolf's army killing 200% of people in his army and there are at least 200,0000 people,goblins and trolls in both armys.People and goblins were yelling: "AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!", furiously as they were getting stabed and sliced. All of a sudden, the Dark Lord was appearing from the shortest distance and swinged his club killing anything in his path.
"Watch out!" Monkey warned Wolf as the Dark Lord nearly hit him with his club.It was now Dark Lord vs Wolf and with a blink of an eye, Wolf stabed him with lighting speed. Now Wolf had the source that controled the whole darkness but before he could destroy it, a big blast almost like a force field seperated Wolf,Monkey,the source, and Wolf and Monkey's memory about eachother, worst of all... the source lived. 345,000 years have pased and Wolf and Monkey got there memory back and been threw alot. It was a sunny hot morning at the Wolf Village (part of Wolfs whole tribe). It was November 23rd Tanksgiving Day, Wolfs favorite holiday yet. People that was half wolf, half human (called wol-nd WOol-uh-nd) was allready getting the feast ready for thanksgiving. Tired and exited, Wolf slowly woke up from his wooly sleeping-bag, same thing to Monkey but more tired than exited. He stayed up all night thinking about the war 345,000 years ago and how Wolf was to late to destroy the darkness .
"Let's eat breakfast befor the feast" Wolf yawned. "it's Thanksgiving arlready?" Monkey said worried like he was late for a meeting. "Uh, I need to go" Monkey said in a hurry as he was getting dressed and getting his fighting knife. "Bu,bu but where?" Wolf asked then yawned. "I will be back when the feast ends" Monkey said as he was walking deeper and deeper in to the forest.


Chapter two
Into the forest


Monkey seemed to be getting closer to Tiger's house. Tiger was a girl that was half tiger, half human similar to Wolf but more complacated than usual. Tiger also helped Wolf and Monkey on some of their journey.
"Tiger!" Monkey yelled quiet. Tiger was raking up the leaves on her front porch and putting them in a large trash can bag. "Oh, hello Monkey!" "What are you doing here in such a dence forest?" Tiger asked, then wondered. "I am here to tell yeh..." Everything was silent exept the birds chirping up high in the trees. "Er... there's goin to be another war" Monkey finally spitted it out. Tigers mouth opened. "You mean?" "Yes" "The last and final war" "Giant trolls and lots and lots of goblins and orc are going to be in that war" Wolf,Monkey, and Tiger new this moment would happen. If they beat this war darkness will fade away forever but it won't be easy. Meanwhile, back in the Wolf Vilage Wolf already ate breakfast and forgeting that Monkey was not there, he was playing Wolf-tag. Wolf-tag is like playing tag but instead you bite not touch and there is no base in Wolf-tag.Of corse, Wolf never, I mean never got bit in Wolf-tag exept in a contest, Wolf was lucky when someone else was it. While Wolf was playing Wolf-tag, Tiger and Monkey was in Tiger's house thinking a way to tell Wolf about the war. "Ok,ok!" "We will tell him directly after the feast!" Tiger agreed to Monkey's idea. "We shall..." Monkey stopped becuase a loud scratchy, screech intrupted them. "Draw your sword and get-out!" Monkey demanded. Tiger nodded quickly and went out-side holding a long, thin,sharp sword in her hands. It seemed like the wol-nds herd it too bucuase a howling sound was heard in the Wolf Vilage.It seemed like the goblins where here. Monkey grabbed his sword and bow-and-arrow and ran out-side to help Tiger and the wol-nds hold off the screeching goblins. Wolf heard the screeching sounds too and came runing with his bow in his hands,sword in his sword holder, and arrows in a lether bag behind his back.Arrows released, swords swinged, blood spilled, and soon, the goblins ran away too scared to fight anymore. "Let's get back to the Wolf Village" Wolf said hungry and tired. They got there right in the middle of the feast, Wolf joined in the fun while Monkey was eating the fruit with his ''monkey friends".



Chapter three
The Ambush!


The fine day was almost over. It was sunset when they finished their feast. Every one got ready for bed and played with eachother. Wolf and Monkey were the only ones that was not playing. Wolf was reading a book called: Ancient Life By Bill Frankfert in his tent and Monkey was outside practicing swinging and slashing with his sword. "Chapter two, The Bull traps" Wolf read on. Monkey saw something on the hills over the forest Tiger lived in. "Wolf" Monkey wispered. "What?" "I am on page. 234!" Wolf said angerly."I saw somthing over there" Monkey said pointing to the same direction were the mysterious thing was. "let's check it out" Wolf said interested. They got their bottle of water, swords, bows and arrows, some fruit and meat, sleeping bags, and a small tent. Wolf carried half of the stuff and Monkey carried the rest. Everyone was asleep in their tents. Wolf and Monkey tiptoed over to the forest called Blackwood Forest. You can tell why it's named Blackwood Forest becuase all of the bark on some of the trees are black and you can find little black bugs crawling around on the nasty ground covered with swamp steam. "Ouch!" "Something hit me!" a stranger called from behind a moist, wet, tree. It was Tiger. "Tiger!" Wolf and Monkey both yelled with anger. "Shhhhh!" Tiger warned to Wolf and Monkey. "Goblins and orc live in these forest... spying" Tiger wispered. "We must set up camp soon or we will have to face the dark" Wolf said. But they did not expect a hudge dragon appearing from behind Wolf and Tiger. "Aaaaaaahhhh!!!" Monkey yelled with fear. "What is the matter with you?" Wolf asked eagerly.
"g-goblins!!" Monkey yelled scared half to death. Then Wolf and Tiger looked back and... "AAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!" Wolf and Tiger screamed. Goblins started surrounding Wolf,Tiger, and Monkey.

Rate it 1/10, im going to type chapter 4 soon. EDIT: Has anyone read this story? Im nervous!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Book   Sat Apr 28, 2007 11:24 am

very cool! keep it up!
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PostSubject: Re: Book   Sat Apr 28, 2007 11:25 am

I will chapter 4 will be up in a few minutes k?

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PostSubject: Re: Book   Sat Apr 28, 2007 11:28 am

kk! good good!
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PostSubject: Re: Book   Sat Apr 28, 2007 11:51 am

Chapter four is up!!!
Chapter four
The Dragons
Not only Goblins started to surround Wolf, Monkey, and Tiger... Dragons too where surrounding them. They Ran for their lives.
"Get outta here! Find help! Now!" Monkey yelled dodging fire arrows and big bursts of hot blazing fire.
Monkey had enough and drew his sword, held it up tightly and proudly, and started swinging like a mad man at the Goblins. Though he was finished with the Goblins... now he had to deal with the 34 foot dragons... that's when help arrived. He heard a long, loud, wolf howl that got every one's attencion. A very big pack of atleast 28 wolves started ranging through the trampeled grass.
"Well done Wolf! Well done!" Monkey yelled to Wolf proud of him.
Wolf let out a slight nodd yes and begining to fight again.

XXXXXXX
A goblin with a ugly wrinkled body and face, torn nose, torn up clothes (almost like an elf's) with a fighting knife, and a few holes of blood around the chest stood near the door to the Dark Lord. The goblin was named Crinch. A few other goblins with heavy armor limped to Crinch and asked in a old, weird, crinchy, voice "May I-- cough-- come in?"
"Why of-course" Crinch answered in a old, shaky, voice. He quietly opened the large long doors to the dark lord... There he sits, in his royal throne.


I know it's short.

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PostSubject: Re: Book   Sat Apr 28, 2007 12:02 pm

COOL! and i dont really care if its short.
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PostSubject: Re: Book   Sat Apr 28, 2007 12:55 pm

Yeah, I will probably name chapter 5 The Dark lord

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PostSubject: Re: Book   Sat Jun 09, 2007 6:20 pm

Lol, if you think of it there is alot of action in this story, not normal action but that kind that makess you grind your own teeth to dust xD

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PostSubject: Re: Book   Wed May 14, 2008 2:09 am

I am going to write halloween
It was a rainy october night. I was working late at the office.The sound was coming from the rain outside my window.DRIP,DRIP,DRIP... It was so peaceful . So soothing . Smiling, I caually glanceed out the window . Chee niblets! A GHOST was staring right behind me! I jumped up to my paws. Squeak!!!
In the next story I hope to seeing u looking forwar to my story. Spongebob
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