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PostSubject: Club penguin in war book 1   Fri May 04, 2007 7:46 pm

Chapter 1

A good afternoon...

There she is... A pink penguin with a purple hoodie, a friendship bracelit, and wearing some flip flops carrying a pile of books in her hands... her name is Licie, one of the cuteist girls in my 7th grade class. I was in a fancy school with a big, proud standing, Club penguin flag standing ontop the roof.
My name is rolfie, always wearing a black jaket and some cool shades with a red hat (for the red team on hocky) standing ontop my blue shaded head. I was always a blue colored penguin. Somehow, I always liked red the most. I walked trembling toward Licie.
"Uh, hi" I gulped standing beside her.
"Hi Rolfie" She said in a very cute voice, shoving all of her books in her locker.
Then a sound I couldn't stand out that much hovered above the celieng, the sound was almost like a helicopter. CRASH!!! The Roof crashed among us. every one started to run for their lives but me. I was frozen with fear, looking wonderlessly on the huge helicopter.




Chapter 2 comming soon! Rate it 1 out of 10. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Fri May 04, 2007 8:18 pm

cool i like it! can i be in it?
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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 9:13 am

Gimmie your penguin name and your in! I'll write chapter 2 soon.

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 11:28 am

my penguin name is Ambie Girl Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 12:48 pm

Oh.... Lol. Here's Chapter 2...

Chapter 2
The war begins

Two Penguins with army shrits and hats started to walk toward me. I was so much in fear that I could not move a muscle. Not even breathe. They grabbed their knifes and started toward me. Some one shouted: "Rolfie!"
Then she risked her own life to save me... Ambie Girl was her name. She was wearing yellow (Her fav color) and a yellow hodie, I have no idea how she got a yellow hodie but that was a mystery to me, but right now was a terror. She was knifed hopefully not in the heart. Then two Mods came in and shot the two army men.
"Are you okay?" One said, sounded alot like Rsnail, and the other was probably Billybob.
"Yeah, but one was knifed." I said worried.
"Where is she?" Rsnail asked.
I carefully holded up her body.
"She is unconscience" Rsnail said. "She was knifed in the chest near the heart"
Something hit me and I blacked out. I soon woke up in the hospital.

Chapter 3 commin soon!

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 1:15 pm

yay make more! that is so awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 1:28 pm

in a minute, I'm vewing some posts on other websites

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 1:32 pm

oh kk
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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 3:03 pm

Chapter 3

The Mods Surround Rolfie

I was laying on a bed with people surrounding me, it was blurry at first but I soon got my vission back. Licie, Billybob, Rsnail, and a few others in my class were around me.
"Uhhh, where am... I?" I coughed out.
"You are in the hospital" Billybob answered.
I soon remembered about the accident that happened in my school, I stood up.
"Ambie girl!" I yelled.
"Woa! Stay down Rolfie, remember, you are still recovering from the gun shot that hit you," Rsnail explained holding me back.
"Gunshot? What about a gunshot?" I asked eager to get answeres.
"You know, the thing that hit you. Didn't you feel it?" Rsnail explained.
I went to feel the back of my head and felt a little hole with blood ozing out as soon as I touched it. He was right.
"That thing...?" I said
"That thing was a bullet" Billybob butted in.
"Hey, I hear something" Licie asked looking around.
"Oh no" Rsnail said and started at the door with billybob.
"What? Why are you leaving me here!?" I asked with anger.
"Another Mod will come to get you" Billybob backed up and started to run again to protect the hospital from the war.


Chapter 4 is comming soon!

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 3:06 pm

You have done a remarkable job in writing! Would you include me as a Warrior on the Dark Side of Club Penguin?

~Liz

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 3:11 pm

I'd be glad to Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 3:34 pm

Srry this is a double post but the one and only...

Chapter 4!

A warrior is met


Soon enough, a Mod was comming named Happy77.
"We need to get you outta here!" Happy77 warned me.

Then, A huge helicopter crashed into the celeing and started to shoot with machine guns at us.
"Hide!!!" Happy77 yelled and grabed me a jetpack to get outta here.
I was somewhat a perfesional when it comes to jet packs.
I was dodging bullets and rockets. Someone (Or something) crashed my jet pack with a good aim.
"Ahhhhhh!!!!!!" I screamed falling helplessly onto the now-flaming Coffee shop. I fell and blacked out when I hit the roof of the coffee shop.
I soon woke up in a military base, on the rockhard wooden floor. Someone rushed me onto a cold table.
"Ow!!! Becareful!" I warned whoever put me on the table.
"Why would I becareful with my enimies?" A girly voice said.
I looked up and saw someone I was enimies for life with...
Lizelia. She was a very mean baby sitter when I was only in first grade. She was wearing a somewhat like genral hat and boots but the shirt was diffrent. Like a Army shirt for instance, but mixed in with a polo shirt you always see in the catolog.

Chapter five comming soon!

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 5:50 pm

ok where do i come bak in?
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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 6:04 pm

In this chapter:

Chapter 5

Ambie Girl's heal (Part 1 of 2)

"You look so diffrent" Ambie Girl said to me a day later after Happy77 has saved me from the enimie's base. I was in the hospital lying with Ambie Girl.
"What do you mean? I look the same as good as new... well... exept the gunshot in my head, your vision must be blury" I exclaimed to Ambie Girl.
"I don't remember anything about some one shooting you... Oh yeah, I do remember Billybob telling me about it.


Sorry it is so short, I was lazy so I decided to make 2 parts of this chapter. part 2 comming soon!

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 6:09 pm

ok then! thats awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 6:20 pm

I thank you for my writing:D I now got pass the lazyness and I wrote the rest of chapter 5.

Chapter 5

Ambie Girl's Heal (Part 2 of 2)

Then a doctor came in.
"I need you to get out" The doctor said to me.
"But.... But why?" I asked.
"She needs some privacy for her surgery" The doctor said shoving me out the door.
"But what surgery?!" I asked too late, he shoved me out the door.
A army man came towards me and said: "You will now be asighned to fight the war with us..."
"WHAT!!! I am not old enough!!!" I yelled to him.
"But.... But it's our only hope of winning this war" the army man said.

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 6:23 pm

so cool! cant wait for the next chapter!
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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 6:37 pm

There is bad news..... And good news! Bravo The good news is that there is no bad news!!! Lol, im funny.

Chapter 6

In the war

I followed the army man to the men's changing room, I changed in there and came out looking like every one else... wearing a army shirt and boots.
"Here is your gun sir!" A army man named Smither handing me my Fire storm cannon. (called a gadulling gun)
X X X X X X

A day of training passed and I was fit for a war now. I grabbed my Fire storm cannon and headed out to the battle grounds. A few army men grabed their guns and was about to start shooting a innocint penguin. I grabbed my cannon and shot them fellas down!
"They'll be sorry" I muttered to my self shooting rapidly at my enimies.

Chapter 7 comming soon!!! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 6:39 pm

lol "they'll be sorry!" lol. i just thought that was a little funny...
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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 6:42 pm

Yeah, lol, that was funny Laughing I'll PROBABLY make chapter 7 tomorrow. Remember, PROBABLY tomorrow.

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 7:11 pm

I guess I was wrong................Chapter 7 is up!!!!1 Bravo w00t! (This is a double post i know)

Chapter 7

In the war Part 2

Some one tired me up in a room and Licie was spoted being surounded by our enimies and even.... Lizelia was surrounding Licie! They shot her and torchered her. That was enough for me! I tried and tried to break the rope but it was no used... She... has died.
"NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I sobed watching her take her last breath of life...
"YOU WILL PAY!!!!!" I warned. I broke the rope and... who knows what happened next?

Chapter 8
The end

I buried her in a grave. A few tears droped on the mound of dirt where she lay.
"It happenes sometimes" Billybob said, trying to make me feel better. I know that some day, this will happen to me too. But I will die in pride, with the girl I love...
The end....

Stay tuned for book 2!!! There is always more Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat May 05, 2007 7:23 pm

I can't post book 2 becuase I'm gonna have some ice cream see ya when ever I get back on! (I know this is a double post srry)

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sun May 06, 2007 10:07 am

A sneek peek of book 2 (Sorry if this is a triple post but I just wanted to give you a sneek peek)

Chapter 1

The Memory

It's been like 3 months sence the war, I have been trying to forget everything ever sence then.... but, it felt like it was stuck there, I had no way of forgeting it fully. I'm Rolfie, 7th grade still. I also had a new princable.

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Sat Jun 09, 2007 6:09 pm

The pictures are kinda harsh O_o dont you think?

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PostSubject: Re: Club penguin in war book 1   Tue Jun 12, 2007 10:24 pm

Club boy wrote:
A sneek peek of book 2 (Sorry if this is a triple post but I just wanted to give you a sneek peek)

Chapter 1

The Memory

It's been like 3 months sence the war, I have been trying to forget everything ever sence then.... but, it felt like it was stuck there, I had no way of forgeting it fully. I'm Rolfie, 7th grade still. I also had a new princable.


i can't wait for the next book! book 1 is great! good work in your stories and i know you will improve in the next book. (if you will continue doing more stories)
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