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Pie Gal 12 Warrior


   Age : 11 Joined : 01 Mar 2008 Posts : 150 Location : I'm in the forest with the rest of my Clan!!!!
| Subject: Double Trouble Sat Mar 01, 2008 1:51 pm | |
| This is a story I wrote. I really wrote it, you can tell because it's horrible. Here you go.
Double Trouble Chapter 1
Joe was walking up to the attic with his brother Kurt because they had to unpack, they had just moved to New York from Arizona. "Come on Kurt." Joe said as Kurt was lagging behind. "Okay, okay." Kurt replied. As they reached the attic Joe thought about having to go to school tommorrow. He wished he had a clone so that he wouldn't have to go. While they were going back up to explore since they had been unpacking for a while Joe caught something in the corner of his eye. "Hey, um Kurt can you go tell mom that I left one hundred bucks in the old house?" Joe said nervously. "What the heck did you just say?!?!" Kurt screeched back. "Just tell her okay???" Joe said. "Fine. But you are gonna be so busted." Kurt said as he jogged out of the room. Yes... Joe thought as he walked to where he saw the thing. It was a strange object. It had a compartment that was very small. It had a trapdoor in the back. He pushed on it. It gave in and he fell through. Something plucked one of the hairs off the top of his head. There was a whirring sound outside. Suddenly the door opened and there was loud breathing in front of the machine. He walked to the front. There was a person that looked exactly like him! "What the-" he got cut off when Kurt came running into the room. He shoved the "clone" behind him. "Boy is mom steamed!" Kurt said shaking his head. Joe said, "Um... How about you go play with one of the new neighbors?" "Well... Ok." Kurt said. Finally, Joe thought, some time alone to investigate. He turned to the clone. " Who... What are you?" the clone said. "I'm Joe. Who are you?!" the real Joe said. "I'm Joe!" the clone said.
Chapter 2 "What??!!" the real Joe said. "Well you see I guess that machine's trap door thing gave in when you pushed on it and well you know the rest." the clone said. "Guess so..." Joe murmered. "Hey I've got an idea! First of all are you any better in school than I am?" Joe asked excitedly. "How am I supposed to know??" Joe # 2 said. "Oh I'm sorry I didn't think about that." Joe said glumly. "Do you know what I was gonna say anyway?" he said sudden- ly. "Of course, it's obvious." Joe # 2 said snottily. "Well PARDON me!" Joe # 1 said sensitively. "Please??" he then begged. "Fine." Joe # 2 said wearily. The next day Joe # 2 to Joe's new school for his first day. He was worse in school than Joe # 1 was. He made sure that all of his classmates were his enemies. The next day Joe # 1 went to school and it seemed like everyone hated him. In Spelling class someone offered to give him the words. He accepted. They gave him fake words. Then at Math somebody tripped him while he was walking to the chalkboard. In Gym they played dodgeball and everybody wanted to be on Robert's team. They all threw the dodgeballs at Joe as hard as they could. After he got home he searched out Joe 2. He shouted "What did you do yesterday to make everyone hate me?!" Joe 2 simply said "They hate you? Oh, I'm so sorry, I didn't want that to happen." he said with a rambunctious look on his face. Joe 1 thought He must be the opposite of me. He must only look like me!
~Em  |
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Emorian Warrior


   Age : 14 Joined : 10 May 2008 Posts : 150 Location : In the world
| Subject: Re: Double Trouble Wed May 14, 2008 2:18 am | |
| Nice story hope to read more.  |
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Pie Gal 12 Warrior


   Age : 11 Joined : 01 Mar 2008 Posts : 150 Location : I'm in the forest with the rest of my Clan!!!!
| Subject: Re: Double Trouble Sun May 25, 2008 3:59 pm | |
| aw thanx!
~Em  |
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Pie Gal 12 Warrior


   Age : 11 Joined : 01 Mar 2008 Posts : 150 Location : I'm in the forest with the rest of my Clan!!!!
| Subject: Re: Double Trouble Tue May 27, 2008 9:12 pm | |
| lol, good ad. i just might add that to my wordpad document!
~Em  |
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2 Bunny Banned

Joined : 26 Jul 2007 Posts : 194
| Subject: Re: Double Trouble Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:36 pm | |
| | Pie Gal 12 wrote: | lol, good ad. i just might add that to my wordpad document!
~Em  |
There you go...
Glad I could yeah.
- 2 Bunny _________________ Hi, my name is 2 Bunny.
My site is Which is by the way, waaaay better than here.
Linzistar is an idiot who got so mad at me, she thinks she has to adjust my signature to justify things. A real sign of a nut. Someone needs to give her a swirly (I laugh every time I think about that).
- 2 Bunny
'Till next time, bozos! |
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2 Bunny Banned

Joined : 26 Jul 2007 Posts : 194
| Subject: Re: Double Trouble Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:00 pm | |
| | 2 Bunny wrote: | | Pie Gal 12 wrote: | lol, good ad. i just might add that to my wordpad document!
~Em  |
There you go...
Glad I could yeah.
- 2 Bunny |
HOLD THE PRESS! SOME IDIOT JUST DELETED MY POST! PANIC PANIC!
- 2 Bunny _________________ Hi, my name is 2 Bunny.
My site is Which is by the way, waaaay better than here.
Linzistar is an idiot who got so mad at me, she thinks she has to adjust my signature to justify things. A real sign of a nut. Someone needs to give her a swirly (I laugh every time I think about that).
- 2 Bunny
'Till next time, bozos! |
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Pie Gal 12 Warrior


   Age : 11 Joined : 01 Mar 2008 Posts : 150 Location : I'm in the forest with the rest of my Clan!!!!
| Subject: Re: Double Trouble Tue Jul 08, 2008 11:12 pm | |
| i know wat u mean, lol...
~Em  |
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2 Bunny ☺ Banned
Joined : 08 Jul 2008 Posts : 43
| Subject: Re: Double Trouble Wed Jul 09, 2008 11:09 am | |
| | Pie Gal 12 wrote: | i know wat u mean, lol...
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PIE GIRL: YOU'VE GOTTA HELP ME!
Do you know who did it?
- 2 Bunny  |
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Pie Gal 12 Warrior


   Age : 11 Joined : 01 Mar 2008 Posts : 150 Location : I'm in the forest with the rest of my Clan!!!!
| Subject: Re: Double Trouble Thu Jul 24, 2008 12:36 am | |
| no i have no clue who did it. sorry. u know wats funny though? everytime u try to say the word H E L P, it says "Yeah" instead.
~Em  |
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